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Wednesday, 5 July 2017

THE LEGEND

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  1. Anonymous27 July 2017 at 11:18

    Hey there Lucas,
    This a cool but scary story,
    Maybe add more detail!
    Thanks, Lucy from Yaldhurst Model School

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  2. Anonymous3 August 2017 at 11:15

    Hi Lucas,

    Awesome story, it's really creative. Why did you create this story? What's your favourite video game?

    Prudence,
    Yaldhurst Model School

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    1. Anonymous21 August 2017 at 12:51

      Hi my favourite game is Rocket League thanks for asking

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    2. Anonymous5 September 2017 at 14:01

      Hi Lucas,
      I enjoyed your story, The beggining, far far away. That sort of sounds like Star Wars, And next time, try to add more detail,
      Albie, Papatoetoe West School

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