Under the bed
He saw something looking strait back at him with big glowing RED eyes,teeth as sharp as swords then the boy jumped back up into his bed with fear. his little sister came into the room and out came the beast and jumped on the little girl and ripped her to peaces. Now there was Blood everywhere even on Michael face all over his room in his bed on the walls and also dripping from the roof the beast crawled towards him but just before the beast could kill the boy his grandma came in the room with a shotgun and shot the beast about 100 times. The beast jumped on granny and killed her just before the beast’s blood ran out of its body. the beast ran out the window. And you can hear the beast scratching on little girls and boys window to this day...😟😟😢😢
Well done Lucas, you have worked very hard on this. You have used more adjectives to help engage your audience. Great job! I wonder what kind of gun grandma had to shoot 100 bullets? Maybe next time you can incorporate your learning and use more adverbs. Keep up the great work.
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