Zoom, zoom, pop, zoom, zoom, pop,
I see them up high in the sky.
Fizz, fizz, bang, fizz, fizz, bang,
The colors look like They're from Wonderland.
Boom, boom, zip, boom, boom, zip,
They look like there stars way up high.
I think i did well it riming the words
What i need to work on- to make my poem longer
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