Hi Lucas, This slideshow is amazing. I like how you present your work it, it's very visible and makes sense so well done!Next time could you add more information.
Hi Lucas, I like how you added pictures for your information maybe next time you could check your spelling e.g you wrote sideshow instead of slideshow.
Hi Lucas, This is Gustan from year 6 in Room 8. I really liked your slideshow about yourself. Next time you could put full stops in your writing,but I really enjoyed reading your slideshow.I can't wait to hear back from you.
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Hi Lucas good job on your slide maybe next time though you could add more information about yourself but still it was a good slide
ReplyDeleteHi Lucas,
ReplyDeleteThis is a good demontation of how to publish a blog post! Next time you could tell us what you would improve on in your slide.
Hi Lucas,
ReplyDeleteI like how you showed us what you like i think it is a good way to display your work Maybe next time you could add in more information :)
Hi Lucas,
ReplyDeleteThis slideshow is amazing. I like how you present your work it, it's very visible and makes sense so well done!Next time could you add more information.
Hey Lucas, I like how your slideshow has lots of slides. Next time could you add more images? Not just the same one? Great work though!
ReplyDeleteHi Lucas, I like how you added pictures for your information maybe next time you could check your spelling e.g you wrote sideshow instead of slideshow.
ReplyDeleteHi Lucas,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your slideshow.
it's really creative.
Just probably next time you could add more pictures not just the same ones.
Hi Lucas,
ReplyDeleteI like your slide here but can you next time make spelling correct.
Hi Lucas,
ReplyDeleteThis is Gustan from year 6 in Room 8. I really liked your slideshow about yourself. Next time you could put full stops in your writing,but I really enjoyed reading your slideshow.I can't wait to hear back from you.