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Wednesday, 8 February 2017

all about me

This week i have been working on a all about me. i have enjoyed this because it was fun. next time I will do more slides.

9 comments:

  1. Hi Lucas good job on your slide maybe next time though you could add more information about yourself but still it was a good slide

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  2. Hi Lucas,
    This is a good demontation of how to publish a blog post! Next time you could tell us what you would improve on in your slide.

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  3. Hi Lucas,
    I like how you showed us what you like i think it is a good way to display your work Maybe next time you could add in more information :)

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  4. Hi Lucas,
    This slideshow is amazing. I like how you present your work it, it's very visible and makes sense so well done!Next time could you add more information.

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  5. Hey Lucas, I like how your slideshow has lots of slides. Next time could you add more images? Not just the same one? Great work though!

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  6. Hi Lucas, I like how you added pictures for your information maybe next time you could check your spelling e.g you wrote sideshow instead of slideshow.

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  7. Hi Lucas,
    I really enjoyed reading your slideshow.
    it's really creative.
    Just probably next time you could add more pictures not just the same ones.

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  8. Hi Lucas,
    I like your slide here but can you next time make spelling correct.

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  9. Hi Lucas,
    This is Gustan from year 6 in Room 8. I really liked your slideshow about yourself. Next time you could put full stops in your writing,but I really enjoyed reading your slideshow.I can't wait to hear back from you.

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